Part 1 are the activities done in TownSend Press. This week, you have been assigned chapter 9. You must score a minimum of 50% in the multiple choice activities, for it to be considered complete. If your grade is less than 50%, you can do it again. Please remember that as an instructor I can see how much time you spend on each activity. The activities are due on Mondays at 9:00am. For this week, complete the following activities from chapter 9:
• Vocabulary in Context
• Matching Words with Definitions
• Sentence Check 1
• Sentence Check 2
• Final Check
Part 2 is a writing assignment where you will include at least 3 of the new vocabulary words from chapter 9. You can also select words from chapter 12 if needed. Your paragraph should be at least five sentences long. Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and overall clarity. At the bottom of your paragraph, please tell me which 3 words you used.
Role – Manufacturer/producer of a product of your choice
Audience – Amazon shoppers
Format – Product description
Topic – Write a product description that can be posted on Amazon, so people know what the product is and how it works before they buy it.
Magic Kitchen Cooking pot by Karen
ReplyDeleteDon’t refrain yourself from having the best at your kitchen. We got you the solution with our durable aluminum construction pot for a prolonged use. It has a non stick quality that can’t be compared to any other product. You will have the opportunity to cook for your whole family with the ample space our product provides you. You will not have any remorse with our product, if you don’t like it you get 100% cash back.
Words: refrain, prolong, ample & remorse
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Karen
DeleteTownSend Press 49/50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Excellent! Total: 99%
BACKUP CAMERA
ReplyDeletePrice: $50 (free shipping with Amazon Prime)
- A new backup camera with ample angle view, great quality image, and easy to install.
- It also includes a monitor with a charging cable and prolonged battery life.
- The size of the camera is 2 cm x 2 cm, and the monitor size is 25 cm x 10 cm.
- The image on the monitor is high-quality color, and can also be altered to black and white color, brightness, and contrast.
(ample, prolong, alter)
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Tania
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ sentences) 8 /10 – Only wrote 4 sentences.
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments: Well done! Total: 93%
Iphone 13 pro max
ReplyDeleteWe cannot refrain in introducing our mostly awaited product “IPHONE 13 PROMAX”. We are optimistic that you all will support us more than the earlier. There is an ample options than the previous iPhones that you can enjoy. We have altered the display , prolonged the battery life and fixed the bugs . There are also reviews arranged in chronological manner. Hope you all support the new product…
Words: refrain, optimistic,ample, prolonged,chronological
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DeleteHomework due 4-11-22 Student: Saniya
DeleteTownSend Press 49 /50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 9/10 You have one subject-verb agreement error. You wrote “There is an ample options” when it should be “There are ample options”.
Comments: This looks great Saniya! You used all 5 words from your list correctly. You also used the word “alter” but forgot to add it to the list. Total: 98%
My dear Amazon customers,
ReplyDeleteI am hereby introducing the new 3 wheeler kids scooter with ample colour options available in it.Its a great option for kids to ride and have fun during summer season.It can be dismantled easily.So,please don't refrain yourself from buying it for your kids.Its available in different cartoon characters as per your kids choice and also if you don't like it you can alter it easily. Its chronic price is 150$ and if you buy 2 together it will cost you 250$.So grab this opportunity soon and make your kids happy during this summer season.
Thanks
Fazila
Amazon representative.
(I have used the words altered,chronic,ample,refrain)
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Fazila
DeleteTownSend Press 40/50
Vocabulary 30/30 – The word “chronic” was not used correctly. However, the other 3 words are.
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Total: 90%
Western Cloth
ReplyDeletePrice $50(Free Shipping With Amazon Prime)
The product is Western clothing for women. Theres ample of demand for it and it’s available in variety of sizes so that women dont refrain from buying it. Fashion can be altered as per your taste so go ahead and make your bold choices right now!
i use words Ample,Alter,Refrain
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Sharmin
DeleteTownSend Press 48/50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 6 /10 – only wrote 3 sentences
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 9 /10 You wrote “Theres ample of demand”. This should be: “There is ample demand”.
Comments: Total: 93%
Product: Samsung Galaxy z fold
ReplyDeletePrice $1,300.
Hello Dear Amazon customers I am introducing New Samsung Galaxy Z fold in ample colors options. In this phone you can alter the memory card and extend to different one. Samsung Galaxy z fold battery is chronic. You have 30 days if you don't like you can return your phone with full price refundable.
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Danish
DeleteTownSend Press 19 /50
Vocabulary 20/30 - Did not use chronic correctly
Length (5+ sentences) 8 /10 – Only wrote 4 sentences
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments: Total: 57%
producer of Rice
ReplyDeleteI suggest you buy my product and post on Amazon.
Ample of population around the world eats rice on a daily basis. I’m optimist that rice has become staple foods for the people and also rice is a food staple in diets across the world. Targeting the Amazon market and prolong, rice is the most widely consumed in the world. You will not regret by posting rice because it is a kitchen staple, and because there are so many different types, it lends itself to an infinite number of recipes. Each type of rice has its own distinct flavor, texture, and properties that complement various cooking methods.
How to cook:
Microwave
Cooking times: 1 pounch-90 seconds and 2 puches-21/2 minutes.
Rice cooker
Cooking process: Rinse the rice, you choose the type of rice you want to eat, water to rice, start the machine.
I use: Ample, Optimist, prolong and regret.
Producer of Rice Hawa.
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Hawa
DeleteTownSend Press 49/50
Vocabulary 20 /30 – The words “ample” and “prolong” were not used correctly. Optimist was also wrong, but that was just a word form error. You should have used “optimistic” for the sentence to work well. I’m taking off one grammar point for it.
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 9/10
Comments: Total: 88%
Liquidation store
ReplyDeleteWe sell Open box and used products here. all our Open Box items are in new/unused condition without any defects and include all parts intended by the manufacturer. We stand behind every item we sell and offer a 30-Day Money-Back Guarantee including free returns on all items. You can buy with confidence and for peace of mind. We are optimistic that all of you will buy products from us and support more. There is an ample options that you can enjoy. We have all kinds of products for you to not refrain from to buy.
Best Regards
(Optimistic, refrain, ample)
Ezizmyrat
DeleteHomework due 4-11-22 Student: Ezizmyrat
DeleteTownSend Press 50/50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 9 /10 – Instead of saying “There is an ample options”, you should say “There are ample options”.
Comments: Total: 99%
Product:4 in 1 car seat by evenflo
ReplyDeletePrice:$209
The Product use in car for babies to toddlers and I'm introducing Amazon product New 4 in 1 car seat by evenflo in ample color which is chronological wise and the Product could be use for prolong time and the most amazing is we can alter it every age group.
I have used 4 vocabulary words
Ample,chronological,prolong,and alter
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Humera
DeleteTownSend Press 35 /50
Vocabulary 20/30 – Correctly used PROLONG and ALTER. Did not use CHRONOLOGICAL or AMPLE correctly.
Length (5+ sentences) 2/10 – Only wrote one sentence
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Total: 67%
Summer is coming. It’s crucial to keep safety if you own a pool. Nobody can pay chronic attention at pool safety. The Sun Pool Safety Net is durably crafted using 100% polyethylene netting for prolonging protection. Available in a variety of sizes to ensure you get the right fit, it’s pool safety netting that will help you safeguard your pool and protect children and pets from exposed water and pool access. Available for your specific pool size and shape, your pool safety netting is designed for easy DIY installation with all hardware and binding materials included. This pool protection net system is extremely lightweight, durable, and great for homeowners with little deck space. I’m blunt that pool safety is no small matter, and you would been filled with remorse if something unexpected happens.
ReplyDeleteI’ve used 4 words they are prolong, chronic, blunt, remorse of chapter 9 in my description.
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Robert
DeleteTownSend Press 49 /50
Vocabulary 30 /30 – Didn’t use “chronic” correctly, but you used the other 3 words well.
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments: Total: 99%
Homework due 4-11-22 Student: Jing
ReplyDeleteTownSend Press 47/50
Vocabulary 10 /30 – “Remorse” was not used correctly. The word regret would fit better. To use “remorse”, you can change your sentence to: “You will not have any remorse after buying it”.
To use the word “alter” correctly, you need to add something after the word. For example: your situation/this/your desktop. You can say: It is time to alter your desk.
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10 –
Comments: Total: 77%